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Great story...sorry I missed this earlier. Thanks to Avery, I got the pleasure of reading it now.

Whew! I thought the worst as to who the monster was, but I did not see the identity until the very end. Great job of disguising the culprit.

Oh My Goddness. That was Awesome! Such a twist at the end! My blood is still racing.

excellent story!
Building the drama to the unexpected end, clueless

I loved the dramatic buildup and the shrouding of what exactly was transpiring in the story.

And the ending was a super twist, I can't imagine anyone saw that one coming; that finale wasn't even on my radar.

Nicely done!

.. didn't have a clue that it would end like it did. Good ending, good twist to the story.

Yet another great entry in the contest. I totally expected a different ending. Great job throwing us off!

Perfect building of tension to the satisfying conclusion. Good job.

I felt the tension building and building. I loved the way you wrapped this story around a horrid 'creature' that wasn't at all what it seemed.

Now when I look at the cover of the book it makes TOTAL sense. (I thought, oh well, another standard 'scary bad guy' story but NO!)

Great job.

Avery